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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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However, it seems like the images haven't been blended together properly [sorry, I'm not the best at photomanipulation so I can't give a suggestion on how to improve that]. That would be cool if you were deliberately going for a collage-like effect [which I think would suit this picture] but here it just seems a little unfinished.
Your choice of colour palette and you composition are both really nice thought
PS Ignore the stars, I'm never quite sure what to do with them.
A rainy day avoids the issue of hard shadows but there is a strong light on the woman's upper body. For the light to fall the way it does, her umbrella would have to be tilted away from the viewer. As it is now, her entire face, and much of her blouse, would be in shadow. There's something a little to modern about the pattern on the umbrella too so swapping it out for another could help you in a couple way.
The other issue is the castle. We are clearly looking up at it, but we aren't looking up at anything else. Those puddles in the road would be streams running downhill. And the photo of the woman isn't an upshot either.
Address those issues and the piece should hang together better. And pay no attention to the star ratings. I just notice the technical stuff but I have to include the stars for dA to accept the critique.
Hope this helps!
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